Divine Right Dungeon

This is my first attempt at writing a short game in twine.  While able to stand alone as a short adventure the plan is for it to encompass the first section of a greater story. Being my first attempt at anything even slightly like this all feedback will be appreciated, especially if it's constructive. 

The rough outline is you are a hero out to save his village from it's ruler Lord Hurley by taking on a dungeon which offers out divine ruling right to its victors.